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Over the next week or so I’ll be rewriting the chapters to iron out mistakes I’ve made (such as spelling and grammar mistakes), and to work in bits that shall be important for the storyline.

It shouldn’t take THAT long.

Hopefully.


The beginning to Chapter 6 has been started.

Don’t worry, Fae won’t die that easily!


Chapter 4 and Chapter 5 are finished.

New point of view from a new character is chapter 5, for those that wanted to know.

Sorry for not updating in a while, I’ve been busy – videogames, etc. etc.

I have the next week off school, so I’ll update some more then.

Sorry about Chapter 5, even though it took me longer, I left one hell of a lot of grammar mistakes and it feels so different. Originally I wrote it for another story, but then I thought “what the hell, I’ll put it in this world”, and here we are.

My try doing some artwork. Who knows? I’ll update the encyclopedia as well, if you so wish.


Sorry about the long delay, I’ve been extremely busy lately.

Instead of updating in bulk once a month, I’m thinking of updating whenever I can in small amounts, to make it more frequent.

What do you think?


Sorry for not posting or updating in a while, but I’ve been behind on school work, have been organizing my thoughts and been catching up on well-needed sleep.

The title for this post is that the next couple of chapters will be in the points of view of characters not yet introduced in the story. I hope you’ll like them!


The encyclopedia is being created for those wanting to know more about specific things within the universe of the stories (or outside of the universe, as the case may be). It will soon include information on each of the Gods, the main characters, the sub characters, the places, magic, the spells, etc.

It will be updated everytime a chapter completes, so be warned, I might add spoilers of the story into descriptions of character’s and other things, so you should only look into it really if you want to know more on a certain subject from within the stories.


P1C4: Started

30Oct07

I’ve started work on Chapter 4, which introduces a new spell to the readers:

Obfaud - The Unlocking Spell

The word obfaud was created from the two latin words ‘lock’ and ‘no’ (‘obfirmo’ and ‘haud’ respectively), sort of like Fey is commanding the door to ‘not be locked’.

In this chapter I’ll also be putting more description into the God’s appearances for the benefit of readers (though I know there are hardly any people that read this – I should advertise more).

Tell me what you think of the first few chapters.

P.S. For those that want to know where her glasses and her wand are, her glasses are in a safe compartment within the chest area of her robe and the wand is held in place with an enchantment in her sleeve, which can be instantly disspelled and recast by the wearer of the robe. Nifty, eh?

*cough* I’m not just trying to hide the fact I forgot about her glasses and wand – nope, not at all. *shifty eyes*


P1C3: Finished

11Oct07

Yep, and currently working on chapter 4.

For those that don’t know, here is a quick explanation on Cuts and Fae’s… status, within the world, along with some on what is to come in the coming chapters.

Well, to answer that last question, Cuts and Fae are travelling alone, though students may crop up from time to time in the future, since Fae also lives with Cuts, having no place else to go (more on that later).

I’ll add more description and names to the Gods in the coming chapters (or edit old chapters, depends what I feel like).

And yes, it was meant to say not. I’ll correct that in a minute.


Yep… well, you get to learn more about the church, but why does the inside of it have marble everywhere? Where is their next lesson going to be? Why do the good guys always win? And why did Lord V-?

Ah, enough ranting, more of the chapter will be up soon.

As you may have noticed, I’m taking my time with this one. I thought the first two chapters were remarkably short, so I’ve decided to add more detail with the new chapters to make them longer and more interesting.


P1C3: Started

26Sep07

You can now read the first part of Chapter 3, and learn more about Fae’s attitude towards the winter and her appearance.

Yep.