P1C1: Almost Finished

08Sep07

The first chapter is almost, finished, and it basically gives a general introduction to the whole storyline.

The chapter is from the perspective of a God (who always sits third from the left), and is nicknamed Bill, so as to be easily memorable and thus easy to refer to. His real name will be written in the more detailed description in the Encyclopedia (will be created after the third chapter).

I hope you will enjoy reading this story of mine as much as I will creating it!


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  1. 1 Church on September 9, 2007 said:

    Interesting first chapter. I’m unsure of what to expect yet, but it seems like an interesting piece so far. Of course, I’m a fan of chess, so I’ll have to keep up with the reading. See you for chapter 2!

    I think there were a few small grammar trips near the middle of the first section. You may want to give it a quick proofread/scan if you get the time.

  2. 2 Melina on December 21, 2007 said:

    very interesting. i’m adding in RSS Reader


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